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My heart is screaming
But no one can hear it
Screaming for your touch
Screaming for your voice
It hurts so much
Why can't you see?
That I'm screaming for you
06/11/2011
I hear your screams
They echo in my ears
They may be silent
But I can feel your fear
Feeling alone
Like no one cares
But you have to remember
That I am there
But no one can hear it
Screaming for your touch
Screaming for your voice
It hurts so much
Why can't you see?
That I'm screaming for you
06/11/2011
I hear your screams
They echo in my ears
They may be silent
But I can feel your fear
Feeling alone
Like no one cares
But you have to remember
That I am there
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Thursday 20th October, 2011
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This has been ratting around in my head for a week or so now, but I'm not sure if I like it or not =\
How does the poem make you feel? What would you suggest for improvement? What is the overall effect of the poem on you?Comments/feedback are appreciated
Words in Italic text are © to *DarlingAngel0565 © 2011 - 2024 Soul-Reader
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The poem makes me want to reach out and hold you.
Or to take you someplace so you can let out the scream aloud, not silently.
The effect it has touched my heart.
Your words are saying more than what is written there.
I suggest to keep expanding on the piece, keep updating it as more and more comes to mind and heart.
I hear your screams
They echo in my ears
They may be silent
But I can feel your fear
Feeling alone
Like no one cares
But you have to remember
That I am there
"Now I challenge you to add onto my words, let them out, set them free from your heart"
Love you sweetie.
Or to take you someplace so you can let out the scream aloud, not silently.
The effect it has touched my heart.
Your words are saying more than what is written there.
I suggest to keep expanding on the piece, keep updating it as more and more comes to mind and heart.
I hear your screams
They echo in my ears
They may be silent
But I can feel your fear
Feeling alone
Like no one cares
But you have to remember
That I am there
"Now I challenge you to add onto my words, let them out, set them free from your heart"
Love you sweetie.