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I watched you walk away at the end of the day.
I felt it growing inside me, like poisonous spores.
Ready to begin the new day.
Another day of pain.

I go home in the afternoon, to be swallowed by the evening.
Lying on my bed, writhing in pain.
Listening to sad music drum through my head.
I succumb to you again and again.

Waiting for you to come, but you never do.
Surrendering to my tears of hurt and anguish.
Hold me please, let me feel your touch.
Hold me, never ever let go.

Wrenching in pain everyday.
And I can't see some new way.
Whatever it brings, let it bring you.
This life is not yet over.

I wait and painfully sit.
Consumed by bitterness and smothered by depression.
Please feel what I feel.
This wrenching pain...  
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~NiOaMi:iconNiOaMi: Apr 20, 2008, 2:37:15 PM
its really good mad:)
very deep
=frizziekizzie:iconfrizziekizzie: Apr 21, 2008, 8:12:35 AM
Thankee darling :hug:

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What others gain is what you lose.
What you gain is what others want.
Either way it is a lose lose situation.
:rose:
~Kasabe:iconKasabe: Apr 21, 2008, 8:39:52 AM
Really Emotonaly, it neally made me cry :cry:

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Some Days It's Just Not Worth Chewing Though The Restraints :)

Excuse me. Have you seen my sanity? I think I've lost it...:P
*RawEm0tion My Only Emotion
~x-Becka-x:iconx-Becka-x: Apr 21, 2008, 9:11:01 AM
:aww: really good mibs

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Death smiles at us all, all we cn do is smile back
Never frown because you never know when someone is falling in love with your smile
A stranger stabs you in the front, a friend stabs you in the back but a best friend doesnt carry kinfes!
=frizziekizzie:iconfrizziekizzie: Apr 21, 2008, 9:34:32 AM
:( Huggies :hug:

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What others gain is what you lose.
What you gain is what others want.
Either way it is a lose lose situation.
:rose:
=frizziekizzie:iconfrizziekizzie: Apr 21, 2008, 9:34:54 AM
Thankee darling :)

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What others gain is what you lose.
What you gain is what others want.
Either way it is a lose lose situation.
:rose:
~DragoShado5290:iconDragoShado5290: May 22, 2008, 6:10:46 AM
i hate pain
but its the thing i feel most :tears:
=frizziekizzie:iconfrizziekizzie: May 22, 2008, 8:51:53 AM
Me too :(

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What others gain is what you lose.
What you gain is what others want.
Either way it is a lose lose situation.
:rose: