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The listlessness
Will settle in soon
She has no more emotions to give

She sits there
Dead to the world
And herself

She does not know
What to do
Anymore

The idle conversations
That take place day after day
Mean nothing anymore

The picture she’s painted
Is just the empty canvas
Of which is no use

No amount of pills
Or kind words
Will save her now

She’s dying
Perhaps already dead
And is just a puppet on a string

It’s happened too many times now
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Number Seventy-Two in :spotlight-left:100 Themes:spotlight-right:
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Date: Sunday 5th of July, 2009
Inspiration: What happened last night and my diseased mind

Yes. I had another one of my thingies last night, and the desire to cut was stronger than I’ve ever felt it before. At 22.30 we went for a walk with the dog in a torrential downpour – and it helped a lot.

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the despair is so palpable in this. very emotive and powerful (: i think the structure is incredible -- the groups of three lines and that one last line underscored your poem wonderfully. i love it!

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Thank you so much - your words mean a lot!! :nod: :heart:

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My life. Encaged for you in a roll of parchment and ink...:jsenn:
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Great work! As always,word choice & layout were excellent!
Very emotional,in the good way! ;)
InstaFav from me! :)
-Laters!

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Thank you for taking the time to look, it really means a lot to me :nod:

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